Poppy’s First Haircut
This Week Friday the 13th week 8 Poppy, Room 11s’ class dog got her first ever haircut. Poppy went to the local Groomers just before the start of school! Before she left she looked like a big ball of fluff, now she looks like a teddy bear. Poppy is so soft! When Poppy came back to school she was really overwhelmed because of all of the attention, In fact so overwhelmed that she fell asleep on the floor. I hope she doesn’t get to cold now that her fur is shorter. Now that she is bathed and all clean she smells like flowers!
By Peita & Sienna
Today me and Peita had the blessing to write a article for the newsletter.
Kia Ora Sienna its Brooke from Parkview Parua school and I like your post about Poppy getting her first hairdresser and it was cute when she came back from the hairdresser she was so overwhelmed when she came back. Maybe you should have put more detail in to it by putting more information about how long Poppy went to the hairdressers for and more detail on what she looked like when she came back from the hairdresser. Brooke :)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Sienna, its Bianca.I really liked your blog on Poppy's first haircut, maybe next time add more information but over all great job.Did you like how poppy looked in the end?
ReplyDeletekia ora Sienna my name is Diya form papakura central school i'm a year 5 student i really like your story about poppies haircut i like the most when she fell asleep during class thats funny well you should check out my blog at https://pcsdiyar.blogspot.com
ReplyDeletethank you for reading this comment
Diya have a great day!