Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, October 15, 2018
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nice work sienna i love your story about ur holiday next time add more detail like wha happened next btw its gemma from ur school
ReplyDeleteHello Annoying Sister,
ReplyDeleteIt's your awesome brother here checking in on your blog. What was your favourite thing about that day and why do you have to bring your friends EVERYWHERE? I wonder will you read this on the day I posted it?
Love, Logan