Myths and Gods

Hello we have been doing back to myths and gods, this is one of my ones i did it is retelling the story of ranginui and papatuanuku, being separated what i could improve on better is highlighting the words so that you guys get a close up of what the answers are, and what i did well on was getting the story correct and trying to learn more maori words, what do you think on how i could improve better on. Thanks